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11 February 2011 @ 09:27 pm
The Protector - Chapter Four  
Title: The Protector
Author: criticalchi
Character death.
If only I had one wish from God--but unfortunately, I don't. I do not own any of these members, they own themselves. The plot is mine.
Summary: Ryeowook's parents hired Sungmin to become his guardian, but never told the younger man about it. Now, his life is in danger and Sungmin saves him, but in turn, kills himself in the process.
Great Note of Author: Posting this today for yukwol :D I'll make a spot for you!


The man blinked, "I'm not Sungmin. He's...my twin brother. My deceased twin brother."

Ryeowook looked down when he heard those words. But they are so identical anyone could mistake them. "Oh... I'm Kim Ryeowook, his best friend."


Sungmin had told him once that he was an only child, but, now that Sungjin told him this, it seems he lied.

"Oh. Sungmin-hyung never told me he had a twin..."

"We never met," Sungjin replied with ease. "My umma, though, has told stories that me and him had to separate when we were young, because our parents died in a car accident, and two different parents adopted us."

Ryeowook nodded. "I'm sorry. You should have met him, he is a great guy. I wished, though, it didn't have to end like this. He..." It still brought tears to his eyes whenever he was reminded of that.

Sungjin didn't look much different from Sungmin, hair-wise. His bangs were just longer and on the right side, while Sungmin's were sometimes placed on the left side.

"Hey, it's okay," the other's eyes softened a bit, hand on his right shoulder. "He didn't really need to know me. I'm just a burden."

"No! Sungmin-hyung always sulked on being an only child, wishing he had a younger brother, at least."

Sungjin smiled at him, "still, I would rather he never knew about me. Because if he did..." he trailed off at that, before changing the subject, "so, how long have you known Sungmin?"

"Well, it has been seven years since I met him." Ryeowook replied, smiling.

"I see. You two must have met at school, huh?"

Ryeowook nodded, smile still in place. "So, since I bumped into you, maybe I should treat you.”

“Sure, if you want to.”


Sungjin and Ryeowook went to a noodle restaurant (after deciding that thinking of noodles made them hungry), and Ryeowook realized: Sungjin is really like Sungmin. They both have that smile, that personality, that way they eat, the way that he laughs and giggles at Ryeowook’s errors, and the way he would be the one to cheer him up whenever Sungmin was in the topics again.

“Listen, Ryeowook-ssi, it isn’t your fault. You said he had to protect you at all costs, right?” Sungjin placed his hand atop of Ryeowook’s own. “He did what he had to do.”

Ryeowook blushed a bit, looking down. “Y-yeah... you’re right.”

“Ryeowook-ssi! You’re blushing,” that grin was on his face.

Ryeowook felt his heart flutter, blushing deeper at that grin. Stupid grin... he thought to himself.

Sungjin smiled at him, “ah, you’re such a cute kid.”

"S-Sungmin-hyung always told me that..." Ryeowook replied, memories of Sungmin's dead body flowing in his mind again.

Sungjin sighed, "hey, what do you think of having ice cream?"

Ryeowook shook the thought of Sungmin and went to ice cream. "That sounds good."

After they left the noodle restaurant, and went to buy ice cream, Ryeowook got a vanilla ice cream with cone and Sungjin bought a popsicle.

Ryeowook had felt like he was with Sungmin, and was a little guilty for only hanging out with Sungjin because of that.

Sungjin licked the tip of the popsicle, before biting it off.

Ryeowook did the usual lick-until-it's-gone technique, enjoying the ice cream.

"So, what have you been doing these past few years?" Ryeowook asked, to break the silence.

"Get in trouble," Sungjin answered.

"What kind of trouble?"

"It's not important, really. I just..." He looked at his hands, and they were very clean. "I kill people, Ryeowook." He whispered, though his face seemed to be neutral; showing no emotion.

"B-but why?" Ryeowook looked at him, before he felt a hand gently slip into his own, holding it tightly.

"My family owed many people money. They said that the only I could repay was to kill..." He looked at Ryeowook, "you. But, I denied it."

Ryeowook looked confused. "What do you mean?"

Sungjin smiled, "it's nothing. I'm just confusing your mind."

"Are you really?"

"Nah, I can't kill a human being. I would be arrested by now, too."

Ryeowook sighed in relief. He had bad memories with killers (he had befriended one once, and only knew when he was about to be killed).

"Worried you there, huh?" Sungjin bit another part of the popsicle, before making it melt and swallowing it.

Ryeowook found that to be awfully hot, and blushed when naughty thoughts filled his mind.

Sungjin noticed this, and placed his hand atop Ryeowook's own for the second time.

He felt the younger man tense at the contact, and the other hand went to Ryeowook's chin. "Ryeowook," he whispered, before tilting the head upward and capturing the man's lips.

Ryeowook relaxed, closing his eyes. Why do I feel like I'm cheating on Sungmin? It feels wrong, yet...feels so right...

Sungjin's tongue slipped in Ryeowook's mouth, greeting the innocent tongue that was Ryeowook's and making it all not so innocent.

"I want you," he heard Sungjin whisper, before pulling away.

"I...don't know." Ryeowook replied, before noticing the ice cream he was eating fell to the floor. He didn't care much. "We barely know each other."

Sungjin wrapped his arms around Ryeowook, and nuzzled his nose.

There's this strange feeling...


When he heard these words, he snapped out of his thoughts. Am I in love with him? Or is my mind replacing him with Sungmin? I can't hurt him.

Ryeowook's hands unconciously place themselves on his jawline, "I..."

Sungjin took the hand and kissed it, "take your time. Rea--"

"Do you love me, Sungjin-hyung?"

"I do love you."

"How, hyung? We only met just now..."

"Does that really matter right now?" He asked breathily, sending chills down Ryeowook's spine.

He then decided it wasn't as well.

Then, lips met each other again, and they safely retreated to Ryeowook's apartment, not caring in the world about what would happen if someone visited Ryeowook (they all had spare keys, just in case Ryeowook went crazy and committed suicide) and see Sungjin.

Ryeowook let out a whimper when he was pinned against the wall, having Sungjin apologize.

"Let's just continue," whispered Ryeowook, "no apologies, talking, nothing."

Sungjin nodded, kissing Ryeowook's neck as he unbuttoned the shirt quickly, revealing the lightly tanned body. He could lick this body forever.

Ryeowook poked Sungjin, and pointed to the bed. They were really in no time for such licking and kissing.

Sungjin nodded, pulling Ryeowook from the wall and pushing him to the bed. Sungjin slid Ryeowook's pants off (underwear included), taking off his unbuttoned shirt, and did the same with his own. "One question: have you ever had sex before?"

Ryeowook nodded, "yes."

"Then, do you have lube?"


Sungjin nodded at that, "then we will have to use natural lube." He gently stroked Ryeowook's member, receiving gasps. There, the precum oozed from the tip. "It might not be enough, but..." Sungjin let his fingers slide through the tip, capturing the 'natural lube' he was saying. He slowly placed his finger against the entrance. "Breathe in."

Ryeowook breathed in, closing his eyes.

Sungjin slowly pushed the finger in, before keeping a slow, steady pace.

The younger man winced, before telling himself to relax.

"I'm getting another finger in," the oldest of the two warned, before he felt another finger slide in.

Ryeowook felt Sungjin stretch him by moving his two fingers like a scissor, and he couldn't help but whimper.

"Third finger," Sungjin breathed, ready to pay attention to his own needs afterward. Finally, as all three fingers were in, his new goal was to find the spot that made Ryeowook see stars. Amazingly, it only took him seconds. It's so...familiar.

Ryeowook moaned, "S..."

The older man pulled the fingers away, sitting on the bed and looking at his member, before stroking it harshly, groans coming out of his mouth. He felt another hand accompany his own, and when the precum he was waiting for came out, he saw Ryeowook looked at it hungrily. "Do you...?"

Ryeowook nodded, slowly leaning forward. When he was near, he sucked the tip, enjoying the bittersweet taste. He engulfed Sungjin's member, receiving groans.

Sungjin dug his fingers in Ryeowook's hair, fluttering his eyes closed and enjoying the hot mouth. "Ah... Ryeowook...if we continue this there might not be anything more than that." Causing the said person to stop and pull away, wiping his mouth with his arms before Sungjin found it seductive and kissed him softly on the lips.

"Come on," Ryeowook whispered, "I need you."

Sungjin lay Ryeowook carefully on the floor, and they started.
criticalchicriticalchi on February 12th, 2011 05:36 am (UTC)
Spot for the number one fan of the story! :D
☆ you're every minute, my everyday: ლ 민욱 ; won't let go even tough timesyukwol on February 12th, 2011 09:13 am (UTC)

ok omg chi, i'm dead rn oh my god i'm happy he found sungjin although it kind of pains me knowing that he's like cheating on sungmin plus, it's like he's /using/ sungjin as a fallback idek but omgggg this is so good bb ;~~~~~;

i love you and our otp ♥
Panmarronblaze10 on February 12th, 2011 01:31 pm (UTC)
hi...new reader here..Spot for myself...^^
Panmarronblaze10 on February 12th, 2011 02:33 pm (UTC)
Omg...But I don't know,I think Sungjin is Sungmin...I have this urge...I haven't read the previous chaps but I really do think they're the same...hehehe

this so nice chinggu...love this..^_
criticalchicriticalchi on February 13th, 2011 12:12 am (UTC)
xD Who knows? Maybe he is, maybe he isn't. But if he is, then who died? o-o I'm guessing he's just Sungjin. xDD

We'll see in the next chapter whether your prediction is real or not ^^ I like predictions of readers, they REALLY express what they think.

Thanks for reading!
Panmarronblaze10 on February 13th, 2011 01:50 pm (UTC)
hehehe...It's because I haven't read the previous chaps,I just thought about it..Or it's just that I don't want Sungmin to die..It makes me sad..*cries*....Gonna read previous chaps first..^^

I can't wait for the next chap..^^

I'll add you chinggu..^_
purplelove2nee8purplelove2nee8 on February 12th, 2011 01:56 pm (UTC)
You updated, BB!^^
Omfg. Wookie. O_O
He's not Sungminnie! -_____-
Oh well, I'm enjoying the story, and wanting for moreee. <3
"Come, On. I Want You." Lololol. =))))))
criticalchicriticalchi on February 13th, 2011 12:14 am (UTC)
Yeah, Wookie will regret that o-o Or will he? xDD

:D I love people wanting for more! I'll give you a spot next time x3

Thanks for reading! :3
purplelove2nee8purplelove2nee8 on February 13th, 2011 03:21 am (UTC)
HAHA. I wish he would! LOL. XD *mood breaker*

Thanks! <3 So, you love me? Keke. XD *hugs*

You're welcome! :D